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Others might feel that we should be spending more money on education.
Still others could argue that corporations, not the government, should be paying to limit pollution.
Consider, for example, the following thesis: Position: In a short essay, a thesis statement appears at, or near, the end of the introductory paragraph of the paper so that readers know the topic of the essay before they see the writer's statement of the central purpose of the essay.
This way the first paragraph helps the reader understand why the writer is writing.
Process: What follows is a method for writing thesis statements that many writers have found useful (we found it in Chapter 3 of The Allyn & Bacon Handbook). Decide what you are writing about: A clear, concise thesis statement does more than outline the subject in question; it makes the reader aware of the writer's stand on the subject in question, connecting a subject with a controlling idea. Think about all the elements your paper will deal with: A thesis generally consists of a subject that contains within itself a number of smaller facts; the topic sentence of each paragraph that makes up the body of the paper should refer (in some clear way) back to the ideas contained within the thesis statement in order to keep the paper from digressing. Think about the purpose and tone of your paper: A thesis statement should contain the main point of the paper and suggest to the reader a direction that the paper will take in exploring, proving, or disproving that main point. State your main point in a sentence or two: A good writer can assert the main idea of a short, coherent essay briefly.
Instead of rambling, be as straightforward as possible. Revise your thesis as you develop your paper: A final version of a thesis statement will only be available after a draft of the paper it is a part of has been completed.There are just too many questions that the claim leaves open.The author could not cover all of the topics listed above, yet the generality of the claim leaves all of these possibilities open to debate.The focus of the paper may change and evolve over the period it is written in; necessarily, the thesis statement should be revised to reflect the alterations in the paper.Few writers finish a paper writing about the exact topic they begin with.You might want to think about where you imagine your audience to be on this topic and pinpoint where you think the biggest difference in viewpoints might be.Even if you start with one type of claim you probably will be using several within the paper.An argumentative or persuasive piece of writing must begin with a debatable thesis or claim.In other words, the thesis must be something that people could reasonably have differing opinions on.If your thesis is something that is generally agreed upon or accepted as fact then there is no reason to try to persuade people.Example of a non-debatable thesis statement: implies that something is bad or negative in some way.